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Reviewer: Stephanei (Anonymous)
06 Sep 2009 2:53 am
Fantastic!! Now we need the back story, what happened up to this point?? What will happen next.

Author's Response: lol I have a vague idea what's happened to get the Atlantis expedition to this point I just have to flesh it out a little more. Oh and find a proof reader/beta, I think the one I asked was scared off by the possibility of slash. (to be fair though he is a straight male and most straight males don't seem to apreciate the slashy love)
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Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
05 Sep 2009 9:35 pm
Very good for your first fanfiction. :) I enjoied it.

One bit of critcism: It always bothers me when authors do this, as it makes it difficult to read everything.

Right now, you have two paragraphs. And only two. Your first paragraph could be split up into three or four to make it easier to read everything, so it's not all bunched together.

The size of your second paragraph is perfect. Not too long and easy to read.

Well done.

Author's Response: thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it. To be honest I probably should have worked on it a little more, but I was just so darned impatient to post it
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Reviewer: channiek (Anonymous)
05 Sep 2009 11:21 am
I think ur off to a great start.Can't wait for the next fic.Hopefully soon...

Author's Response: thank you. I have quite a few ideas for more fics, so yeah I probably will be posting more.
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