Stinkin' AWESOME. Jaw-dropping, eye-popping awesome.
BEST John/Elizabeth fic I've read. The characterizations were spot-on, and I love love love the storylines with the other characters, Ronan, Teyla (Teyla/Carson! Squee!)and the nod to Sg-1 with the bar (I don't do slash, but it was funny!)...
Okay, I'm rambling much, but I love how you portrayed the Elizabeth/John relationship. Writing from John's POV was great, I was in his shoes, and could understand his attraction.
This fic shows me why John/Elizabeth are so GREAT together and would be fabulous as a couple, even if they hadn't met in Atlantis, and were normal people.
You threw in realistic conflict (the "break-up" scene was great) and you showed instead of telling, so many little details about their lives.
Love, love, love! Keep up writing, in general!
Reviews For Lost in New York
Reviewer: D.D.B. (Anonymous)
28 Mar 2010 8:43 pm
Reviewer: Guinevere (Anonymous)
19 Sep 2009 3:40 am
This was a great story! I'm always a fan of fluff :) Though I'm pretty sure I almost caught the flu just from reading the part where everyone got sick.