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Reviewer: Shaddyr (Signed)
18 Jan 2010 3:57 am
I loved the classic Sci-fi feel of this story - excellent work! A very Noir future - I love that Rodney took and stand, and that Kavanaugh was a slimeball and twisted his work and that John managed to be true to the original parameters anyway! Awesome!
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Reviewer: Al (Anonymous)
17 Oct 2009 10:41 am
very very brilliant - it has that lovely atmosphere of early hard scifi I used to read. Everything from FlashTransit to corrupt corporate government to the slow build up of trust between John and Rodney is well done. Thanks for a great read.

Author's Response: I appreciate your comment. Thank you... the atmosphere was just what I was going for, making the relationship between John and Rodney the focus and the only kind of 'real' element. So glad you enjoyed it.
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Reviewer: enviropony (Anonymous)
17 Oct 2009 7:07 am
I totally missed this during McShep match. It's wonderful - despairing and creepy and hopeful at the same time. Very cool.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Your description was exactly what I was going for in writing this... I'm so glad that came through.
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