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Reviewer: bubbysbub (Signed)
18 Dec 2009 7:26 am
ha! very cute, thanks!

Author's Response: Thanks! :)
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Reviewer: fan64 (Anonymous)
12 Dec 2009 9:57 am
I love your work but you always leave us hanging. I'd love to see you take on a more NC-17 scene. You write the characters very well.

Author's Response: I guess after 12 years of writing sex scenes - I'm sexed out! LOL! Just can't seem to write them anymore, you know?
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Reviewer: Anonononon (Anonymous)
12 Dec 2009 9:45 am
I liked this a lot.

What was Johns promise to Rodney? It seemed like John was getting all his own way there at the end rather than a compomise with two promises. And if John really considers Ronon snd Teyla (especially Ronon) to be civilians that he needs to protect, even if thats just technically, then I would think that they would be even angrier with him than Rodney, who actually is a civilian and a "brain trust". There's being a responsible leader who looks after his people and then there's being a marytr who doesn't trust his people to do the jobs they are there for. They are all there as a team together, not as back-up for John that he must protect at all costs - that kind of attitude is actually very bad leadership in a military situation. As a former serving officer myself, I know that if you can't deal with the fact that people under your command are going to put themselves in danger (often on your behalf) then you aren't fit to be in charge, especially someone in Johns position.

I hope that didn't sound too negative, I actually really enjoyed the fic but was just left a bit bemused by Johns attitude towards his team and the soldiers he commands. It's one thing to be willing to sacfifice yourself for others (an admirable trait) but to not respect that the people you serve with have that same right kind of bugged me because of the enormous disrespect to his fellow soldiers and professionals that it implies.

Author's Response: No, not negative at all :) just honest and the way I like my reviews. Since this was, I think, only my second SGA, I was probably too tentative since I was going for humor (with a touch of angst that I find I can never totally escape *G*). I should have been more...should have explained more. And Ronon and Teyla *are* civilians but I should have said that John would feel it his job to protect and lead any members of his team, civilian or not. Yeah, he'd expect them all to do their jobs, but still feel the weight of his responsibility. I sometimes forget folks can't read my mind! LOL!rnrnThanks! :)
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Reviewer: A (Anonymous)
12 Dec 2009 9:01 am
Wow, John you raging hypocrite ;) Very enjoyable - nice to see John getting a taste of his own medicine for once (although if he seriously expects Rodney to keep that promise he is dumber than he looks). Both childish and very in character for both of them. The only thing I would point out is that Rodney McKay (or rather the actor that plays him) despite having what I'm sure many people would consider several physical imperfections (in comparison to the "gorgeous" John) certainly does not have a weak chin - his strong jawline and chin is one of his more prominent features! Nicely done fic.

Author's Response: Honestly, I *do* think DH has a somewhat weak chin *g* and kind of 'jowly' jaw line - but that's also one of the things I like about his face. He doesn't have that perfect, sculpted face (although, when younger, he did, oddly enough) and yet, he's so damn attractive! LOL! He gets older and to me - better. I compare the young DH (impossibly beautiful back then) to the DH of now - and I prefer him now. *g*
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