Wraithbait

Very nice story. Good character development of John. Nice story arch. Kept the reader involved. A little light on the Rodney/John relationship. Rodney would have been a little more involved with John and his new partner, but Lorne was an excellent substitution. A few spelling mistakes but very well put together.

Author's Response: Thank you for your encouraging words. I very much appreciate the feedback. It was a fun story to write since it almost seemed to write itself.

I really liked your story and have read it one go. I will defenitely come back for a 2nd read.

One thing about the story info did confuse me. You listed Daniel Jackson and O'Neill as characters in your story but I never saw them a single time.

Or will there be more chapters where they will show up? But then I get confused since the story is listed as completed.

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words. You are so right about Daniel Jackson and Jack O'Neill - they are supposed to be there but I see that I somehow missed a couple of chapters when uploading the story. This was the very first story I had ever written (of any sort) and my first upload online so I'm still getting used to the software. I will correct this mistake and all listed characters will appear. Thanks for taking the time to read what I've written, and thanks for the encouragement.

I liked it, read it all at once.

Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate the feedback.