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Reviewer: cath (Anonymous)
10 Jan 2010 10:25 am
Wow, great story. I really like the plot line.

This would happen to John, wouldn't it? Poor dear. But Atlantis crew came through at the end. Yay team!

I'm glad that the other Universe was so understanding. And I really like the way you touch upon the potential problems that might arise due to character differences in alternate universes. Wonderful story telling.

Thanks for writing and sharing.
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
08 Jan 2010 3:19 pm
Poor John :(. It's one thing to be injured in a dangerous situation, but quite another to be minding your own business! Poor Rodney, too, having to watch it happen and not be able to help straight away; having to watch his John suffer so much.

I'm glad they figured it out in the end and that the other Lantean's were so quick to destroy the device.

Laura.
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Reviewer: RamDragon (Anonymous)
08 Jan 2010 12:54 pm
That was so cool. I liked it. I was expecting an evil plot was hurting John not another reality. Excellent story.
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