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Reviewer: McSheppy (Anonymous)
21 Jun 2005 8:18 pm
Everytime you up date this I get a little more confused...but in a good way Can't wait for the next part :)
Kiss and Kin
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Anonymous)
17 Jun 2005 9:12 pm
Nice bit of ambiguity from the guys there :). I was amused by the fact that John wasn't discharged because of morale issues *g*. Looking forward to the next chapter. Laura.
Reviewer: fanficaddict (Anonymous)
17 Jun 2005 4:16 pm
hehehe! Cute! Love the verbal games of tag :D Very well written, more please!
Reviewer: museum_gnome (Signed)
16 May 2005 7:08 am
This was really good! You did a nice job of writing flustered Rodney and explaining the John/chaya storyline. Made me feel all goey inside:)

Author's Response: Thanks. Sorry it's taken me this long to respond - I thought the rule was not to! I hope you are still enjoying the story.
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Anonymous)
16 May 2005 12:44 am
*Hee* Well, that was somewhat unsuccessful technically, but hey, it worked for all that :). I liked John's thoughts beforehand too, it was an interesting back story for him. Laura.