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Reviewer: Popkin16 (Signed)
13 Nov 2010 4:30 am
I like how you didn't make Keller into the "bad guy" in this. I don't like Rodney/Jennifer, and I think the writer's did a terrible job with her character, but it's nice to read a fic every now and then where Jennifer is REAL and not just the one who is in the way of John and Rodney's love~ Wonderful job and FASCINATING concept :) I love how you handled all the very real issues the two would face in this situation!
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
11 Feb 2010 6:24 pm
Awww, yay, but also a little bit of sadness.

I'm all about the slash and normally I'd think nothing but happy thoughts that Rodney dumped Jennifer for John, but the intimacy of John and Jennifer's situation made me feel more sad for her than I normally would have.

Still, I'm not sorry that Rodney picked John- they were very hot and sweet together :).

Laura.

Author's Response: I never liked Keller much but she managed to secure a small space in my heart over the course of writing this- just so long as she’s not with Rodney. As for your other reviews: John is the luckiest unluckiest bastard ever, of course he got himself into trouble. And Jen, yeah, there’ve been a few John-and-Rodney body issues fics but I just wanted it to be about Rodney overcoming preconceived issues about two people who meant so much to him. It’s not obvious but this is just as much about Rodney as it is about John. And once I had them switched I couldn’t help putting them into a shower together- it was my favorite scene to write ;) Thank you for the wonderful comments!
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
11 Feb 2010 6:01 pm
I loved how they helped each other out in their unfamiliar bodies, demonstrating the best way to maintain them. Poor John, having to cope with a period ;). Although, to be fair, it wasn't so much the period itself as the flashback-y trauma associated with the blood. Anyhow, weird as it may be to say that I've just enjoyed reading a detailed, blow by blow account of menstruation... I have just enjoyed it o.O

Laura.
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
11 Feb 2010 5:24 pm
Well, that's another fine mess John's got himself into... and he's taken Jennifer along for the ride, though she doesn't seem quite so traumatised by it. Rodney obvously doesn't know what to do with the body swap yet, either. I'm looking forward to what happens next. Just how long will they be in this predicament?

Laura.
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Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
25 Jan 2010 6:07 pm
Aw. I love how Rodney came to the realization that Jennifer just wasn't enough for him and I love that John took their relationship at a nice pace for Rodney. :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I actually wrote the entire huge thing just because I wanted to write Rodney's realization there at the end, so I'm so relieved and happy it seems to have worked!
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Reviewer: tonisimone (Anonymous)
25 Jan 2010 6:48 am
this is my fav kind of McShep and you did it so well. in fact I don't think I've seen it done better.

Author's Response: *VBG* Thank you so much!
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Reviewer: gail (Anonymous)
24 Jan 2010 5:49 pm
Delicious.

Author's Response: Thank you!
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