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Reviewer: RamDragon (Anonymous)
11 Apr 2010 3:42 am
This is very emotional. It makes me cry. Each time I read my heart breaks. You have written a really good story and I don't care what your spelling is like or your grammer either. I absolutley want to read your follow up story. Keep going please. I want the tears to end. I crave a happy ending.

Author's Response: it will be a looong way before it gets to a happy ending... well if my plot bunnies will allow it..they are a nuisance.rnI have 5 chapters of the follow up but i want to have it almost finished before i will post it. rnTHX for the review.
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Reviewer: TheDoctorIsIn (Signed)
08 Apr 2010 2:26 am
Yeah a beta would go along way, they where called into to "meat" with each other?

Author's Response: thx for the review! i will get a beta... and then re post this...
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Reviewer: liz (Anonymous)
07 Apr 2010 8:59 pm
Think you really need to get this beta'd. Lots of it really doesn't make sense. i.e. 'Now John barley tolerated the mere presents of the doctor.''they would definitely pull trough.''He was not the one the hunches but he felt uneasy.' Idea has potential though.

Author's Response: I am not a native speaker of English, and i do have dyslexia, which is not an excuse but it does explain some mistakes i make,i will try to get a beta thx for the review!
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