Reviews For A Week Of Play

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Reviewer: Mystic (Signed)
08 Apr 2010 12:53 am
A good story, but needs a beta badly. I kind of wish John had used Rodne's words to Torren, about how many love him, especialy John, and how lucky that he was indeed or something like that. Keep that romatic touch. Still enjoyed it though.
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Reviewer: missingw (Anonymous)
06 Apr 2010 7:22 pm
I enjoyed the story--always love jealous!john, and I like the way all the snippets fit together.

I do recommend getting a beta--there's a few errors that are distracting: conscience vs conscious, to vs too, etc.
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Reviewer: B_C (Anonymous)
06 Apr 2010 2:07 am
That was a very good story. :)
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