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Reviewer: TheDoctorIsIn (Signed)
07 Apr 2010 10:30 pm
It does seem abit rushed, like you made a list of plot points and just wrote them with nothing to bind them together, great idea but needs fleshing out
Upon Meeting the Major
Reviewer: Mystic (Signed)
07 Apr 2010 1:08 am
A really good idea for an AU. I like the idea and I can see Rodney being the best at what he does and their time together making something more than Surgery. The only thing I didn't care for was the rushed feeling of the story. It needed a bit more leagth to signify time as their love grew and the conflict of Doctor/patient rules, syndorm...before the grand moment where it's discovered it is real and they both want the same thing. Perhaps you'll flesh it out some and repost as I said really great idea.
Conclusion
Reviewer: gail (Anonymous)
05 Apr 2010 2:26 pm
Interesting choices. I'm having a hard time seeing Rodney. Maybe its the shortness, but there doesn't seem to be enough snark?

Author's Response: I agree, to be honest. The challenge was new to me, and I was trying to get all the points of the challenge, but in doing so I lost some of Rodney on the way... especially the snark. Thank you for your review!
Upon Meeting the Major
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