this was absoutely adorable. I loved the whole story and the interupptions had me feeling for the two of them.
I feel you got the charcrterization just right. And the love making was sensual as well as sexual.
It was a lovely story and thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Thankyou! I really appreciate your lovely comments! I wanted to develop a story where I could explore their relationship in a LOT more detail; through humour, revelations and plenty of sweet, tender, loving moments. (So I'm very pleased you enjoyed it.) Hope you will be interested in reading my next Laura & Carson story. rnrnMany thanks for taking the time to respond:)
Reviews For Hot Under The Collar
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
10 May 2010 10:24 am
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