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Reviewer: Ayama_chi (Signed)
19 May 2010 5:49 pm
Amazing. And so realistic, I envy you for being able to write like this. I don't know how close it is to reality, but I liked your John. It was both pragmatic and possessive, the hard ass commander. I look forward to read more from you :)

Author's Response: *Blushes* Thank you! I don't usually write this style, so I'm really glad to hear that it seems to have worked out. =) I'm glad you enjoyed this John, it was certainly fun to write a more 'hard-ass' John. =) Cheers, Ace
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Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
16 May 2010 2:29 pm
Ah, I really do love your pieces. :) And I love this piece, too. Just the play of the characters and just how rough John is... I think it really fits him.

Author's Response: Thank you. =) I don't know where this John came from, but it was fun to kinda play fast and loose with his character. It does kinda fit him. =) Cheers, Ace
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
16 May 2010 5:58 am
That was very hot and sweet. John seems pretty settled and happy where he is; maybe one day he'll be able to say the words to Evan.

Laura.

Author's Response: Thank you. I think, oddly enough, hot and sweet was pretty much what I was going for even though at the time I wasn't sure I was going for anything... lol. I agree, John does seem pretty settled. =) Cheers, Ace
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Reviewer: EmAnD (Signed)
15 May 2010 7:56 pm
Is it too much to hope that John loves Evan? So good! As much as I want John to love him back its so good to think that he doesn't and Evan will love him no matter what. Just really good!

Ok I have to ask, how would John react to someone coming along who, if given the opportunity, Evan would be able to love and be happy with? I'd like to think John would be selfish and keep Evan from this person.

Author's Response: I think John is just afraid to love Evan. But I still think he cares for him deeply. =) I think it wouldn't matter if someone else came along that could love Evan the right way, I think Evan is fine with everything how it already is with John. But I definitely think this John would be totally possessive and selfish. =) Cheers, Ace
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