Reviews For The first day

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Reviewer: freekydj (Signed)
16 Aug 2010 4:06 pm
A fun read.

Just another normal day at Atlantis-or so it seems. I'm glad none of my "first day"'s at work were never this exciting. I think I especially loved the wraith arm--the wraith would give me nightmares to start with, but somehow the idea of animated body parts would just be so much creepier--I'd never sleep without checking under the bed and in the closet again!

I think he may have redeemed himself a bit with McKay since he did still get data from the console!

Author's Response: Thanks for your kind review!
Chapter 1