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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
31 Oct 2010 11:49 pm
Awwww, yay for the fluff! o/

This was lovely. I loved how both of them were with Madison and I loved that her child's innocence gave John a few things to think about and, ultimately led him to confess his feelings to Rodney. Hot and sweet.


Author's Response: Thank-you so much! I really appreciate you taking the time to send me feedback and I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
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Reviewer: not_so_fast (Signed)
16 Sep 2010 8:24 pm
You're so good at nicknames, I daresay! That was very nice, thank you!

Author's Response: Thank-you!
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Reviewer: Harumi20 (Signed)
16 Sep 2010 2:53 pm
I like this kind of sweet stories. Not for the chocolate and the candy in there *smile*, no , but for the cuteness between the characters, especially Madison, how she says the truth in a childish way. It's good to see that Rodney and John get together and I love their insecurities in dealing with each other. I can't believe it, Rodney as a very shy person? It's very cute, somehow.

It was fun to read this kind of halloween story. Very well written.

Author's Response: What a lovely thing to say! Thank-you so much for taking the time to comment. I have always thought that Rodney's social bravado and social awkwards stemmed from the same root: he is terribly shy and insecure. I love it when he is befuddled and can't seem to get the words out and I think John is equally befuddled by his own emotions. They are so perfect for each other. Again, thank-you for your "sweet" review.
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Reviewer: Mystic (Signed)
13 Sep 2010 9:49 pm
What a wonderfully sweet treat for Halloween. Loved it, thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: Thank-you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Reviewer: campylobacter (Signed)
12 Sep 2010 4:37 am
"Your Uncle Mer wants to marry someone more like..." he struggled for how to put it, "more like...well, more like Barbie over there."
Sweet and poignant and a little heartbreaking at the same time.

"But he broke up with Dr. Barbie!"
Because Dr. Barbie likes He-Man better and finally noticed the way Ken looks at GI Joe. ;-)

Look, I don't mean to be rude but you are going the wrong direction! There's a clear pattern to the store.
Quintessential McKay.

Rodney leaned back ever so slightly and resisted the urge to snuggle into John.
Aww, this is McShap-tastic.

"Come out of the closet much?" Rodney laughed. John snickered and whispered something so filthy in Rodney's ear
LOL: "I'm going to come in more than a closet."

The overall tone is light-hearted and sweet; it's definitely not a dark, brooding angst-fest of Evil Overlords torturing the protagonists into heavy hurt/comfort, but a sugary confection of diabetes-inducing rainbows, sparkly rhinestones, cookies, chocolate and declarations of love. :-D

Author's Response: Well, I was kind of going for sweet, so I guess I succeeded. LOL. Thanks for all your help with this one. Hope you are not insulin dependent now as a result.
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Reviewer: B_C (Signed)
11 Sep 2010 8:13 pm
Awww, that is so sweet. :)

Author's Response: Thanks!
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