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Lovely story. I liked the pie theme and how it came to mean more than tasty dessert. I liked how each little section progressed the story and the emotions through the years. The whole thing with Teyla's cooking made me smile :). While Jennifer wanting to change Rodney so much made me sad. I'm glad Rodney finally caught on. It was very sweet and hot at the end.

Laura.

Lovely story. I liked the theme of pie and how they came to mean more than just nice dessert. I loved how each little section advanced the story through the years and through the emotions. The whole thing about Teyla's cooking made me grin :D. Best of all, I loved it when Rodney finally *saw* John, saw the feelings he'd been so careful with; not hiding exactly, but not advertising them either. The ending was lovely- sweet, hot and so very them with the bantering :).

Laura.

Eeeeeeeeeeee!

This is fantastic! The pies, the life and death situations and the absolute Rodney/John schmoopiness. This is made of complete and utter win!

Thanks for posting this slice of deliciousness!