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Reviewer: carter_mckay (Signed)
15 Nov 2010 10:57 pm
I loved reading this story. It's not my normal pairing, is it anyones? lol.
I love stranded together stories.

It was a well written story, fun pairing. And I love how they had to work up to a relationship.
It seemed sad at the end but was better that Jack found a child that needed him, a child he somewhat shared with Carter.
I was a little teary when Sam told Daniel of her name choice.

Great fic.

Author's Response: I like stranded stories too :) I'm glad you enjoyed mine! Thanks for the feedback!
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Reviewer: madwhiskey (Signed)
14 Nov 2010 2:08 am
This was so good! I do have a small problem though. After Sam and Ronon were found, there was hardly any mention of John. He was Ronon's best friend and never gave up hope of finding them. You pretty much only mentioned Sam's friends from SG-1. I hope since you didn't mention a name for the new baby, that either his first or middle name is John. Other than the John oversight, I really, really liked this.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! You're right, I did sort of ignore John in the ending. I guess in my own mind once he found them and brought them home, his part was done. I've been thinking about a short coda to this that I can add on to a couple of things left hanging, John being one of them. Thanks for the feedback!
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