Oh, honey, I tried to read this, but your editor's comments are mixed up in your story line. You need to go through and clean it up.
Author's Response: Thank you!!! So sorry I didn't edit/respond earlier. I moved in Dec, and only now has RL started to ease up that I can focus on fandom. Again thank you for the nudge its appreciated =)
Reviews For Picture Perfect
Reviewer: Jantique (Signed)
14 Dec 2010 12:29 pm
Chapter 1