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Reviewer: lilz54 (Signed)
20 Apr 2012 2:17 pm
This was definitely cute. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm happy you liked it.
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Reviewer: Mystic (Signed)
12 Jan 2011 8:24 am
A cute story over all. A tad confusing in parts as there was no seaperation in areas, where in some there was and made it clear the scene was changing. Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: This was my first dabble (for me, I'm usually the epic novel) and if I dabble again I will keep you in mind. I like when someone points out something I can do better next time.
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