That was quite the intense story. The dialogue between John and Rodney was funny and quite moving at times.
I could just picture the scene and imagine the horror of what Rodney was going through. Then having him make the tragic decision to shot who he thought was John almost made me cry. The twist that it wasn't Rodney's John was so sad.
I also liked how you gave them both a chance to talk about it.
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Oh, this fic is so *terrifying* I was scared and crying when I thought it was John, even though I made sure to check for a happy ending. Fantastically done, this fic will haunt me for some time.
Powerful and haunting at the same time. I can see Rodney will be scared mentally and emotionally on some level for life after an event like that. It also shows how strong he is to have recovered as much as he has, most would be through the gate living in a condo w/ pest control on retainer. Thanks for sharing.
This is a skilful story, leading us from the happy go lucky to the depth of darkness, and all done with such a sure hand. I really felt the horror build and didnt see the payoff coming at all. Poignant and affecting, this is going straight on my favourites lists.