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Reviewer: lizlou (Signed)
06 May 2011 5:45 pm
must admit i had some problems with this story. I could accept what happened in the AU but found things became a little unbelievable when he returned. No team? And Carson would never have had Lorne there while he examined him. Also the idea of sending a bomb through to wipe out the entire AU seems a little off. One bad abusive 'relationship' doesn't mean the rest are the same. Characters seemed a little off to me.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading my story. I appreciate the feedback. You are correct that with this one I took a few liberties, such as the team, to make the story work the way I wanted. Destroying the AU troubled me from the beginning but I wasn't sure what to do to resolve the conflict and bring some closure for John. If you have any suggestions for alternatives I would welcome your thoughts and ideas. Thanks again for reading my story and for taking the time to give me your thoughts.
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Reviewer: ellieangel1701 (Signed)
21 Feb 2011 3:09 pm
was a little wary at first but once i started reading i just couldnt stop, well done.

i loved the ending just so nice and snuggly.

ellie

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. This one was a hard one to write because I kept changing course. I'm glad the ending worked for you. Thanks again for your encouraging words.
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