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Reviewer: Manic (Signed)
14 Mar 2011 4:21 am
I really enjoyed the fic until the end. In my mind it didn't seem like Cam to be so inattentive to his partner: not allowing John time to adjust, (I was under the impression this was John's first time and that Cam suspected that was the case as well) and not making sure John got off......anyway, otherwise I enjoyed both this fic and the other one in the series which I can't pin down the name of at the moment :) I look forward to more. Thank you for sharing.

Author's Response: Breakthroughs and Bureaucracy is the name you're looking for :) Hmmm I understand where you are coming from, but personally I think that Cam has a bit of an darker side than most people see, and in this story he wasn't expecting anything other than a one night stand. I appreciate the criticism though, every bit helps me refine it and keep everyone in character as much as possible!
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Reviewer: allthat (Signed)
05 Mar 2011 9:39 pm
Wow, that was hot! No wonder John had to travel to a different galaxy to get over him.

Author's Response: Well he never really gets over him. I mean, I don't lol still, John/Cam is by far my favourite pairing, so expect more in the future ;)
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