Reviews For The Descent

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Reviewer: prince (Signed)
27 May 2012 9:21 am
Love this story! The affection and banter between the two are adorable. And Sam's POV is awesome.
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Reviewer: bridgettebbg (Signed)
26 Jun 2011 12:42 pm
I love this story, because it showed the deep emotional connection that is between John and Rodney. The two of them know each other so well and love the other enough, to simply be who they are and not worry about judgement. What made the story so great was how you worked the other characters in the story so well. From Sam realizing just how much Jack and Daniel's relationship is similar to John and Rodney. Ronan(Chewie) was great as a trusted friend and Rodney's bodyguard, who realizes just what John will do to protect the man he loves and what he will do to anyone who hurts him. I also died laughing about the joke pulled on Caldwell and his crew. Overall, I thought it was a great you told and hope to read some more in the future.

Author's Response: wee thanks! glad you liked it ^_^... and I am kinda working on a kind of sequal :S I just need to find the time to actualy get it right ^_^
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Reviewer: ShatteredSig (Signed)
25 Jun 2011 1:42 am
I adored this fic! I love the connection between John and Rodney and that Sam finally realized Jack and Daniel have something. Having John torment the guys was mean, but really funny. Wonderful job!

Author's Response: Thanks! and I thought it was a particular John thing to do /evil grin
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Reviewer: tjun (Signed)
24 Jun 2011 12:31 am
Good story. The part about Rodney submitting to John's authority was a bit out of character though. Rodney allowing John to have that sort of authority over him under any circumstances except professional ones is something pretty much invented by fangirls who get off on the idea of John being a big manly possesive macho man and Rodney bizarrely meekly submitting to him - a position not supported by the show itself where Rodney only backs down professionally when it's appropriate and even then frequently attempts to get his own way regardless (Doranda, Elizabeths nanites, Wallace, being only a few examples of Rodney not respecting any power John believes he has) and personally, well no more than John himself. Rodney is probably the least likely character to be submissive in his day to day life and John, while protective, is hardly the possesive type. It's a shame that this "fanon" version of Rodney and John has been spread about fandom by authors who have a poor handle on the characters because it becomes so widespread that good authors such as yourself get sucked into the fanon and thats the sort of character mishap that stops a good fic like this from being a great one.

Author's Response: umm Thanks I think ^_^... And I totally hear you, and ya, ok I might have fallen into the fanon a little, but there was a reason for it being that way, but I still think John's care giving when Rodney is so ill is cannon, have you seen 'The Shrine'? John cant keep his hands off Rodney when he's sick :P (And is where most authors get the possessive John from). I guess I just didnít make it clear enough >_< and thought I had evened out the character at the end... I have angst about all the sap while I waited for this fic to be posted (over a month or two) but in the end I just couldnít bring myself to change it :P rnBut it is my 1st McShep and no apologise for being a sap writer, I wish I could help it but I do love my H/C ^_^... thanks again for the feedback, I'll try and keep it in mind with the others I have half finished :P no promises, I think we all see what we want in the characters ^_^ it's what makes fanfiction so fun! rn
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Reviewer: B_C (Signed)
23 Jun 2011 10:28 pm
That was a great story. Especially about the practical joke on the pier. *L* I can just see Caldwell falling down. :)

Author's Response: tehe thanks! and that bit was the most fun to write ^_^
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