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Reviewer: 1059939 (Signed)
25 May 2011 2:18 am
Poor John

Author's Response: lol... he did have a bad day. Thanks for the feedback!
Consequences and Communication (complete)
Reviewer: FlyBoy (Signed)
19 May 2011 2:17 pm
I read your story last night and I have to say that this was beautifully done. You wrote a beautiful, engaging story that clearly showed the anguish the two characters were experiencing. I was captivated and thoroughly enjoyed your story. Thank you so much for sharing your story with us.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the feedback! There were a lot of rampant emotions going in both men, but I'm a sucker for a happy ending so it all works out.
Consequences and Communication (complete)
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
09 May 2011 12:10 am
That was close, but I'm glad Evan was willing to give John the chance to fix things.


Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! Angst is no fun for me without a happy resolution!
Consequences and Communication (complete)