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Reviewer: Pinkpetunia (Signed)
02 Jul 2011 7:07 pm
I really enjoyed the story. I did have a few problems with typos, and some turns of phrase didn't feel right. It tended to knock me out of the story.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the story over all. Thank you for taking the time to leave feedback, it's always appreciated.
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Reviewer: chubbypup (Signed)
10 Jun 2011 10:23 pm
A lovely story showing how it could have been if John and Rodneys lives had taken a slightly different path.
Was the student lock story taken from an episode of MacGyver?

Author's Response: Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed the story. The basic concept was from MacGyver but not the actual event as I discriped. I tried to place everything in the notes, but wasn't sure if that was needed, as again it wasn't exactly but inspired by along with a similar event in 21 Jump Street. Good eye.
Chapter 1