"'You'll be fine, Carson. Just give me a moment.' The dread in McKay's movements and voice is almost endearing. 'I'll know what to do in a second.'"—beautiful--Rodney trying to stay in control and not quite succeeding
You took a few lines from the ending of the episode and developed them into a lovely fic. I can see you wrote it two years ago, but I just found it--and am very glad to have done so!
Reviews For Obiter dictum
Reviewer: Aelfgyfu (Anonymous)
18 Jun 2007 2:26 pm
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Reviewer: Krysalys (Signed)
19 Oct 2005 9:06 am
Wow. Spectacular. Really wish they could've shown this as the tag for the episode.
Wonderfully written.
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Krys
Author's Response: That is a most flattering compliment. Once again, I felt a distinct lack of closure for the episode, so the niggling need to do something about it became a need to write. I'm very glad you enjoyed it and thank you so much for the kind words.
Author's Response: That is a most flattering compliment. Once again, I felt a distinct lack of closure for the episode, so the niggling need to do something about it became a need to write. I'm very glad you enjoyed it and thank you so much for the kind words.
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Reviewer: bridget (Anonymous)
05 Jun 2005 7:22 am
This was a touching piece. Poor Teyla, wanting to help but couldn't.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Reviewer: lurky (Anonymous)
22 May 2005 8:38 am
a wonderful, touching character piece. the shifting of emotions was well done. having it from Tayla's POV somehow made it more real.
Author's Response: To be honest, I had written the story from three different POV's before I settled on Teyla as the logical choice of the observer, and not the protagonist. I'm glad you enjoyed the outcome!
Author's Response: To be honest, I had written the story from three different POV's before I settled on Teyla as the logical choice of the observer, and not the protagonist. I'm glad you enjoyed the outcome!
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