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Reviewer: Kimber (Signed)
17 Aug 2011 9:28 pm
So, cut to black and imagination does the rest...nice truly. Screams for more and yet satisfies you that in the end it all came out okay.
Against Your Will, You Are Alive
Reviewer: Harumi20 (Signed)
17 Aug 2011 11:52 am
A wonderful story! And a little bit sad, too. The characterizations of Rodney and John are great. And it is so Rodney-like that he worries most about John and his urge to suicide missions. And that he's frightened that the next mission could be the last one where John doesn't come back. Poor Rodney. It's cruel that he witnessed such an incident at the age of five. And that he compares his experience with John's behaviour.

I love the last line: "....he gave John a serious look, "we need to talk."" I hope they will find a way to sort out that kind of problem without a verbal fight.

Very well-written and thank you for sharing.
Against Your Will, You Are Alive
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