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Reviewer: Erica (Signed)
30 Sep 2011 9:20 pm
Oh, man - that was fabulous. What a *satisfying* read, which I would never in a million years have thought could have been done set in Disneyland! lol

Your Rodney was spot on - I was gleeful at his handling of the Californian - and so very supportive without ever once being OOC. What an achievement!

And John - :::woobles:::. So believable, so easy to see him reacting like that. I especially loved the way you portrayed how he cut off his past - not just over this disaster, but before coming to Atlantis. It perfectly told the story of the "why" of the character's lack of backstory on the show.

I want an epilogue, tho - Ronon and Teyla giving him what-for. Especially Teyla and her awesome new leg, I'm thinking bantos training will rise to new painful heights the first few times back... :-)

Author's Response: Thanks! I've been having this plot bunny running around in my brain for months now. Glad I finally put it on paper. In every piece you're really happy with there is a personal ephiphany about a character. And that bit you culled out about John was my personal epiphany. That this made real sense to me (we all have our personal bios of the characters). That to me is the essence of this fic. Um, TMI? Anyway, thank you!
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