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What an amazing story! I was hooked from the beginning and just couldn't stop reading! Thank you for sharing your talent and an amazing read!

Oh my goodness, this is absolutely fantastic. Thank you thank you thank you!

Really loved this story. I don't even watch Hawaii 5-0, but the way you wrote the characters, I didn't need to, they were so well fleshed out. A sequel where the 5-0 team become SGC reservists would be great fun. Hope you write more, the plot on this one was terrific.

This was great! Loved the whump, and the way John stoically carried on. Thought you got all four characters spot on , but i especially liked Danny and the way he goes on even more than Rodney! Loved the uniqueness of each persons gift and how well it suited each person. Would have quite liked to see them all in Atantis together - but two like Sheppard and McGarrett? Just a bit toooo much I think!
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I really enjoyed this; you got all four of them spot on and I loved their 'gifts'. And I could understand Danny not wanting to subject Grace to the Wraith, but oh, to see Rachel's face if he decided to take her LOL. Thank you for sharing it.