Reviews For Keepsakes

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Reviewer: notzathros (Signed)
10 Jan 2013 7:35 am
So sweet! Love this story!! Thank you for sharing this.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!
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Reviewer: Alinea (Signed)
04 Jan 2013 11:41 pm
Beautifully written and kept me reading wanting to learn what happened next which is the mark of a good story. The incident with the orange fleece nearly did for me and I''m not a weepy person!
The ending was sweet and not at all sickly. The team dynamic and the ethical debate was great too. I wonder if you thought of a different ending at some point; something a little more bitter sweet?

Author's Response: Hello, and thank you very much for your comment. Your enjoyment of the story and willingness to let me know has made me very happy. :DrnrnYour question of whether I'd thought of a different ending is an interesting one. To be honest, I'd always had it in my head that John would eventually return to his human self and that Rodney would be the one to discover it because John would deliberately escape the habitat to find him. But I literally couldn't think of a good way to write that for years, until I needed to fill in the 'Theft' prompt for my HC_Bingo card, and the idea of Rodney leaving gifts helped me shape the rest of the plot. :)
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