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Reviewer: minnow1212 (Anonymous)
25 May 2005 9:31 pm
Neat insight into both of them, and great voices.

Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Anonymous)
25 May 2005 4:29 pm
Excellent. You've caught both John and Elizabeth's conflicts well. John not wanting, and then wanting command, and Elizabeth wanting to help him, but being tied by her position. I like to think that John could talk to Rodney, get a good snark session going. That would help, I'm sure *g*. I liked Elizabeth's final words, the fact that she has said it out loud, if only to herself. Laura.

Author's Response: I'd hope that John would turn to Rodney, too, and I can only imagine the sort of snarking that would go on! Thank you! I'm so glad you liked!
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