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Reviewer: bridget (Anonymous)
05 Jun 2005 8:13 am
wow. Very nice. I like the idea that Elizabeth has such concern for her teammates. I liked how you described everyone, it fits everyone quite nicely. And I definitely liked how you wrote John, it seems like he's got some dark secrets hidden in that head of his. I'd love to see you touch more on that. Lovely work. :)

Author's Response: Thank you! -- I see Elizabeth like the leader of a holiday camp - making sure that all of her charges are safe and resting peacefully before she can find rest herself. As for dark John ... well, just wait and see what the future brings.
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Anonymous)
25 May 2005 9:34 pm
Wow, this is such an interesting idea, and I loved Elizabeth's observations of everyone. They all seemed to fit the characters exactly- I can particularly see Aiden dreaming about his grandparents, optimistic even in sleep, and not plagued by the days events. Rodney too, with his sudden theories, seemed highly plausible. But John was my favourite I think. The way he keeps himself so controlled during his nightmares (a nice contrast to Teyla by the way) and his reaction to Elizabeth interfering were great. And the fact that Elizabeth was more scared by him than the Wraith for just a moment was pretty powerful. I love fics that look at his darker side. The ending was nice though, John making up for scaring her. Laura.

Author's Response: Laura, what fantastic feedback, thank you so much. No, seriously, thank you. From the bottom of my heart.
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