Reviews For Puddle Jumping.
Good one. I like the image of John and Rodney rolling over into Elizabeth's legs. They're a bunch of kids, and I think Carson just likes to annoy them.
This was really cute. Loved the thought of Rodney making mudpies, and Teyla's reaction to the whole thing. The ending was brilliant.
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Anonymous)
28 May 2005 1:02 pm
Heh. Maybe they should invite Carson, as well as Elizabeth, next time. I loved Teyla's initial apprehension, and that the guy's enjoyment won her over. I was also amused by the whole 'chastised kids' thing *g*. Laura.