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It was really fun : liked McKay's over reaction ! ^^

I'd like to know if you allow me to translate it for french_fanfics on Live journal : link.

Keep it up ! ;)

The story was very short and I might have wished for it to be longer to really find the humor of the situation. Also, I don't get the "fucking" language. We have no character evidence of it for Rodney and it seems quite prevalent in some fic; really smart people don't typically resort to swearing, and while I can see John doing it, I only rarely--more rarely than this--can see Rodney doing it.

Author's Response: You are entitled to your view.

*snicker* With those oh-so talented fingers and mouth, hell yeah he's gonna have John screaming Hail Marys all damned night. *snicker* Great job. ----}-@ Krys

Author's Response: *grins* no doubt about it. Thanks.

A nice piece, but the use of the word "fuck" is out of character.

Author's Response: Well, I think it was required. He'd just come out of a bad reaction to citrus, he was well entitled to swear. But thank you for your comment.

Really enjoyed re-reading this one :-)

Author's Response: Thank you, glad you liked it.