Wow, very good story! I wish we got to see the fulfillment of the prophesy, but they said they love each other and they are gonna get married two out of three plot points all sewn up.
Thanks for sharing.
SID
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review. I have written a follow up story to this one, called 'The Journey'. I'm going to start posting it today. It develops some of the plot points of 'The Porphecy' a bit further.
Reviews For The Prophecy
Reviewer: Obsidiana Girl (Anonymous)
17 Feb 2006 3:52 am
Coming Full Circle
Reviewer: ripsculmincon (Anonymous)
23 Dec 2005 10:33 am
I'm really intrigued. What is this prophecy that caused her to say no to his marriage proposal? I hope you continue.
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