Reviews For Achilles Heel

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Reviewer: Formaldehyde (Signed)
02 Mar 2010 6:32 pm
Your handle on the characters is stunning. Very powerful work.
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Reviewer: sparrowhawk17 (Signed)
23 Jan 2008 10:29 pm
Wow. So perfect. You hit on everyone so well. I especially loved John's, if he could sprout wings...he would.
Thank you.
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Reviewer: Krysalys (Signed)
18 Jan 2006 5:47 am
That... was so frelling COOL. I wonder who the last entity was. Would love to see a story based around who or what this one is... or was. ----}-@ Krys

Author's Response: *blushes* Thankies. I whole story about the 'builder'. Without John or Rodney? *blank look* A story... without John or Rodney... nope, doesn't compute...
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Reviewer: Fledge (Anonymous)
23 Sep 2005 2:44 am
Very insightful, and very touching. Even the 'builder' watching over them has his weakness, his yearning for mortality. Who is he, the first of the Ascended, the one who showed them all the way?

Author's Response: Yeah, the 'builder', was in my mind anyway, the first of the Ascended and he feels closer to our race than the rest of them for some reason...
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Anonymous)
06 Jun 2005 7:02 pm
Wow, this Each person's weakness is so very in character, as is the way they deal with it. i liked the idea of the Ancient builder watching them all too. Laura.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it and that they all worked, I was a little worried some of wouldn't work.
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