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Reviewer: Amanda Beckett (Signed)
30 Jan 2008 9:10 am
Good work, this was great!
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Reviewer: Illman (Signed)
11 Jun 2005 5:18 am
Enjoying the power dynamics in this chapter. Well written!

Author's Response: Thank you!
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Anonymous)
11 Jun 2005 12:05 am
Oooo, John/Rodney/Carson ::takes a moment to admire the shiny::. Ok, moving on...I loved your portrayal of Rodney's reactions, first as he dealt with losing John, and then once he found that John was alive. Carson's thoughts were good too, his anger at John which ebbed away when John returned, and his concern for Rodney and knowing just how to calm him down enough to make him understand that John was alive. Which leaves John- I liked the fact that he didn't realise quite how livid Rodney was, or just how much trouble he was in. Still, he seemed to have gotten back on their good sides- unless Rodney and Carson are just lulling him into a false sense of security? *g*. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Laura.

Author's Response: It is shiny isn't it? And why move on? They're the pretty. Thank you. I wanted to show that Rodney was going to be really upset over John's actions without actually bringing up his past. I wanted him to have issues but nothing too obvious. I'm glad that Carson came out well too, because I felt that he was OOC in some places. John...He was still a little shellshocked, poor boy. Good thing he has his boys to take care of him. Heh, security. You'll see. *g* Thanks again.
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