Reviews For Paper Doll Chains
Reviewer: red (Anonymous)
14 Jun 2005 9:27 pm
So sad, and so beautiful. I love the way this story is constructed and can't wait for more. Were John and Rodney together before the incident? I get the impression they were, but Rodney can't remember.
Reviewer: sia (Anonymous)
14 Jun 2005 8:34 pm
love it love it more pleeease
Reviewer: Ratgirl (Anonymous)
14 Jun 2005 7:58 am
Incredibly fascinating. Please, do write more. For someone whose entire life is defined by his intelligence, this is perhaps the worst thing that could happen.
Reviewer: Jessica (Anonymous)
14 Jun 2005 12:41 am
You had your own chains between the present and the past holding the story together. Very intriguing.
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Anonymous)
13 Jun 2005 10:49 pm
Well, you've certainly caught my interest with this! I love the way you've started telling us the lead up to Rodney's current state in flashback. The paper chains thing was interesting, how he needs them to help focus. Who took them away? I would imagine it was Kate, or maybe Carson. I'm glad John managed to convince whoever to let Rodney have them back. That last bit, with John kissing Rodney was another layer to the story. How will Rodney react to this? And will it help of hinder his recovery? Will he even *make* a recovery? Like I said, you've peeked my interest ;). Laura.
Reviewer: ellisonbabe (Anonymous)
13 Jun 2005 9:31 pm
Very chilling; it leaves you wanting more. Can't wait for next chapter.
Reviewer: AcidBeast (Anonymous)
13 Jun 2005 8:34 pm
Oh, very nice written. More of this stuff!
Reviewer: Purpleyin (Anonymous)
13 Jun 2005 6:25 pm
Very chilling, need more
Reviewer: fanficaddict (Anonymous)
13 Jun 2005 3:12 pm
Wow! Incredible beginning! More please!!!!