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That had the wonderful 'awww' factor. Very touching.

Very satisfying ending :). I loved Rodney's concern for Carson, and his cunning plan. I was pleased that John, Aiden and Teyla were joining in too. Very nice. Laura.

Awww! that was so sweet! Excellent job, I especially liked the followo-up :D

Poor Carson :(. You've really caught his personality here; how he pushes himself so much. I wonder though, if someone actually came in and told him to rest, would he do it? I don't know as he's just as stubborn as all those he has trouble making rest- Sheppard and McKay for example *g*. Still, it's a shame that he's gotten ill now too :(. Laura.

Suffering from a strep throat and a bad cough myself at the moment this is really the perfect story for me! I can feel with everyone on Atlantis. And of course with the poor, hardworking, sick and tired Scottish lad! I'd like to care for him! Seriously, this is really a nice and well written glimpse into Carson's life on Atlantis. You picture him and his attentiveness and his sense of duty perfectly. I like it very much! Bye, A. Now, where was my chamomile tea again...