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Reviewer: allykatd (Anonymous)
14 Apr 2006 5:13 pm
Very nice story. Well written without going into too much 'detail', if you know what I mean.
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Reviewer: JeepNY (Anonymous)
27 Sep 2005 2:00 pm
Great story, are you planning on continuing?
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Reviewer: Nessva (Signed)
02 Sep 2005 5:29 pm
John was in the water up to his chest, pushing his wet hair back. Oooh, now there's a sight I'd like to see! Great fic.
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Reviewer: eretria (Signed)
21 Jun 2005 5:43 am
Your talent is astonishing, you realise that? Feeling so strongly toward a pairing I'm not even really sold to is something only one bloody good author can accomplish. And it works. Works fantastically. The scenery, the scenario, the heat, the water, the sand ... If only you sink deep enough into the story, you can feel the ocean breeze. Amazing. And, well, just the way Elizabeth watches John and the water and the sand on his skin is incredibly sensual. Another thing about your writing - the sensual details. "Hot" doesn't quite cut it, it's ... erotic. In the best and most elegant and and most real way.

Author's Response: *BLUSH* wow. Thank you so much for those generous words. I might have to frame this. :)
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Reviewer: SGA Arlessiar (Signed)
20 Jun 2005 8:20 am
That was sweet, and you described everything very vividly. The sand under her toes, the heat... I loved the fact that they weren't just doing it but are waiting a little longer, taking each others hand as a sign that there is more between them. And how John convinces Liz that "this" isn't something to think about too rational but to feel instead. Bye, A.
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