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Reviewer: Becs (Signed)
28 Dec 2008 9:18 am
Awww :o)
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Reviewer: katie_kibble (Signed)
29 Dec 2006 11:02 am
Though there were some mistakes in it, I'll let you off because I liked the story =) I like the idea of Rodeny writing those letters, I can imagine him doing it.
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Reviewer: rh (Anonymous)
20 Feb 2006 12:57 am
Ah, just one little thing I wanted to point out: Markham wasn't the other guy who died in The Defiant One- I'm pretty sure that guy's name was Abrams(sp?), and Markham died during The Brotherhood.
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Reviewer: Papillon (Anonymous)
10 Jul 2005 9:45 am
You should use less "..." it's totally breaking the pace of the story and is really tiring to read. For the French part, there's a big mistake because "feutre" is the material, like in a felt-tip pen, you know ? It would be something like "Je n'ai jamais rien ressenti de tel. Jamais dans ma vie. J'aime mon chef d'équipe." The last "amour" reads strange too, because the other two words are adjectives and this is a noun but well, I'm bitching around. I guess Sheppard's mistakes are voluntary, but maybe you should at least spell "aime" with the letters in the right order ;) All in all I liked it - I read until the end after all :) - even if it was a bit predictable. Wish you all the best with your future stories. :)
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Reviewer: April (Anonymous)
31 May 2005 9:42 pm
Great story!
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Reviewer: mandy (Anonymous)
28 Nov 2004 9:02 pm
Very good! Also very sad until the end. I like how you brought Sora in to save the day. She really does owe them.
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