I like it. Great descriptions and characterization. Not to mention you had the character voices down. I really loved the words "enslaving my dreams" or something like that. It was awesome keep it up.
Author's Response: Thank you! It's nice to know if I've gotten the character voices right. Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reading. Suz
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Reviewer: OMA (Anonymous)
16 Sep 2005 2:41 am