Reviews For Dust Devil Dancing
Reviewer: Mei (Anonymous)
28 Oct 2009 10:04 pm
Teyla/Bates, yay! I love that you didn't gloss their antagonism but used it to make the whole scene hotter. And Ford's internal voice was a perfect mix of incredulous and turned on. Through him I could see the whole scene in my head - smell it, practically. What a complicated dynamic for such few words. Awesomecakes! ^_^
Heh. Silly Bates, you'd think he'd know better than trying to best Teyla...or maybe it was all just a cunning plan ;). Laura.