Reviews For Melusine

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Reviewer: lyonside (Anonymous)
06 Jul 2005 1:24 am
This was a very good fic with an episodic feel. Teyla and Ford may be underutilized, but, hey, that's in the show. Good villian with decent amount of backstory - if the Goauld derive from/inspire/mimic human gods in the Milky Way, what terrors and myths would the Ancients in Pegasus have brought with them?

Author's Response: Thanks! I was always very interested in the mythological aspects of the show, so, really, it was only a matter of time until something of the kind showed up in my stories :). You're right, of course. Teyla and Ford were underutilised. It was a decision in favour of the plot's dynamics. If I had included the others more, it would have distracted the reader from the central conflict. How's that for a feeble excuse :)?
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
01 Jul 2005 11:24 pm
Ok, me again. I've just noticed that the line I wanted to comment on for chapter one didn't post for some reason :(. Seeing as it was the whole reason for that post, I'd better let you know that it was the line about the writing looking like a finch had wandered about after falling in some ink. Laura.
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
01 Jul 2005 12:27 pm
Excellent story. I thought the girl/monster was intriguing, and scary once she got the teeth going. I loved the whole Sheppard/McKay thing, especially because we saw the thoughts behind the rift. I'm glad that John figured out what was bugging Rodney, even if he doesn't intend to talk about it...though I suspect Rodney could wheedle it out of him eventually. The ending was very nice, and so them; no words spoken, but it was loud and clear anyway. Very nice. Laura.

Author's Response: Thank you for your thoughtful feedback! The idea for the ending came to me quite early in the progress. I could picture John and Rodney in the infirmary; now I only needed a reason to get them there :).
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
01 Jul 2005 11:33 am
I'm about to read the next part of this, but I just had to comment on this line: I just thought it was a great image. Laura.

Author's Response: Thank you, I hope you'll enjoy the rest.
Reviewer: fanficaddict (Anonymous)
30 Jun 2005 3:04 pm
Excellent story :D Wonderfully written with superb descriptions.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Reviewer: fanficaddict (Anonymous)
30 Jun 2005 2:24 pm
Excellent start :D "McKay’s just the average Fizzgig" LMAO :D He does remind me of Fizzgig, especially in this story hehehe. Wonder what's up with him...reading on :D

Author's Response: You know Fizzgig!!! Yes, Rodney often reminds me of Fizzgig: always making a roar, always in need of a hug :).