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Reviewer: Keenir (Signed)
19 Oct 2005 3:49 am
Very very haunting story, superbly written. I applaud your skill. I'm afraid to ask for a sequel, so I shall simply ask for more fic. I agree: second-person perspective is very tough. But you have succeeded beyond anything I could do. I salute you! Have nice days.
Reviewer: Jessica (Anonymous)
17 Oct 2005 12:32 am
This was great! It was all believable, and I could really feel the pain and shock. The last line very poignant.
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
02 Jul 2005 12:14 am
The second person pov really puts you in the story, and you've written the detached shock well too. I'd say this qualifies as different to your usual :). Laura.
Reviewer: Xiji (Anonymous)
01 Jul 2005 2:27 pm
That's wonderful. Wonderful. I love second person when it's done well, and it's done so very well here; not a word is wasted and it packs a hell of a punch. Love the disjointedness and the ending, oh, ouch. Oh, Rodney.
Reviewer: fanficaddict (Anonymous)
01 Jul 2005 1:19 pm
Great job! I normall don't care for second person but I really loved it here! Awesome!
Reviewer: Alanna Smithee (Anonymous)
01 Jul 2005 10:27 am
Terrific! If you wanted to write something different you succeeded. You managed to capture the "warzone"-aspect of Atlantis nicely. In the first season the find themselves in a hostile galaxy, unable to return, unprepared for the situation, cut off from earth and supplies. They don't even really have to fight the Wraith until Siege. I so believe that under these circumstances it would eventually become Rodney's main job to built bombs against the Wraith, and yeah, eventually he'd have to kill somebody.