Reviews For Cannonball
This was great, but I think my favourite bits were Radek thinking about Elizabeth being a nice but intimidating woman, and poor Rodney getting dunked by John and no one paying any attention :). Laura.
Radek slumped when she cut out; he always felt he ought to sit up straight when she was nearby, eat his vegetables, wear sensible shoes. Lovely woman, strangely intimidating. That bit alone was delightful, and by far not the only delightful moment in this story. You write a wonderful Radek-voice, and the description of the heat and its effects are marvellous. Thank you!