Reviews For Lucidity
Reviewer: Caro (Anonymous)
23 Nov 2005 7:21 am
I loved this story, it was very sweet and made me laugh out loud!
*happy sigh* And *snicker*... Rodney drunkenly bemoaning the fact that he'll end up with "average" intelligence? *snickersnort* That man slays me! ;) Wonderfully written. ----}-@ Krys
I thought you handled Rodney's confused feelings very well, especially his self-snark and the lament that his alter ego was a teenage girl :). I loved that Radek and Elizabeth had figured out his feelings. The whole Wraith dart concept was intriguing, not only was the actual design well described, but the interface with Teyla was interesting...though a bit macabre. I was so pleased when John finally got to the bottom of Rodney's worse than usual snark and cornered him on the balcony :). Laura.
Reviewer: fanficaddict (Anonymous)
12 Jul 2005 2:38 am
wonderfully done! Loved the ending :D Great fic!
I also like the concept behind the Wraith dart and the things that Teyla had to do to fly it. Rodney's angst and confusion were very well done, with him simultaneously realizing something about himself and afraid that his feelings would not be returned.
Love it. Funny in some parts, angsty in others. The concept behind the Wraith dart was impressive. Now I need a sequel.