Reviews For Bondage Smut
Reviewer: Fledge (Anonymous)
27 Jan 2006 9:03 pm
This was a very interesting 'aliens made them do it' story. I really like the fact that John was so shaken by the whole experience, and that it took a long time - and Rodney's bull headed persistence - to come to terms with it. John was very believable in his anger and avoidance that were mostly directed at himself, but taken out on Rodney and Carson. Carson was very sweet and gentle. And Rodney was great, typical Rodney, not an iota of tact but his care and concern shines out of him all the same. Also very believable *why* John wouldn't let Rodney all the way in, that he was scared he would lose control, this is an excellent insight into his character. Great fic! (Although I would have been tempted to have them argue a bit more over whether they should write off this world, but can't because they really need the trade, as I'm sure everyone's first instinct would be to tell them to go to hell.)
Reviewer: Krysalys (Anonymous)
10 Oct 2005 2:49 am
*happy sigh* Now they can go back to that planet and say "Hey, now we can't trust you. How about we shove this p-90 up YOUR asses so you can prove to US that YOU're trustworthy, huh?" Sheesh... Excellent writing, m'dear. ----}-@ Krys
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous)
20 Jul 2005 2:15 am
Excellent. From beginning to end. The reasons for the plot were a bit iffy, but McKay's dialog made it real. Write more like this!
"Just a smutty bit" she says, completely forgetting about all the splendid angsty stuff going on between smut! I loved this right from the old 'aliens made them do it' start onwards. The smut was hot ::fans self::, but I really loved the emotional stuff, that John particularly was dealing with. I loved that he was so angry, but even though he was taking it out on Rodney and Carson, it was mostly aimed at himself. I was so pleased that Rodney didn't let up, didn't let him bottle it all away. I think the fact that they were newly involved added a whole extra layer too, John fearing that his inability to cope would lose him Rodney, and his anger at the fact that he should have been able to deal because it was Rodney. I thought you caught Rodney's mixture of guilt, patience and hurt very well too. It was nice to see them talking it through, and then I was worried all over again when John avoided him for two days :(. It turned out ok in the end though, and the love and trust really leapt off the screen (as did the hotness *g*). Laura.