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Reviewer: fyre (Anonymous)
28 Apr 2006 3:00 am
Sequel!!!! What happends next? Perhaps from Rodney and the City's point of view. How do they deal with a sentient city when only Rodney seems to listen? How will the military deal? Must have more. A great story. I've read your other stuff too. You have a real gift for the characters, it is like I can picture them saying the dialogue with the actors voices and everything. KEep writing.
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
27 Jul 2005 12:02 am
I loved this. It's such a change to see something from Atlantis' viewpoint, quite ingenious too. I loved seeing the episodes from her pov, recognising the incidents, but seeing them in a completely new way. And her thoughts on John, Carson, and particularly, Rodney were great. I loved the ending, the others concerned about Rodney, but John agreeing with him. Very nice. Laura.
Reviewer: mandy (Anonymous)
26 Jul 2005 8:44 am
Very cool idea, especially the way you gave a disctinct motive for canon actions (e.g., the quarantine during the nanovirus incident--a mother protecting her children). Well done!
Reviewer: Dr_Dredd (Signed)
25 Jul 2005 8:42 pm
I think I saw this either on LJ or, and it's just as good reading it the second time around. I love your description of the characters as archetypes: the Scientist, the Pilot, the Hungry, etc. And Atlantis is the Mother of all.
Reviewer: Linda (Anonymous)
25 Jul 2005 2:57 pm
Wow! That was very very nice. I loved the tone of it, the real sense of voice you gave Atlantis. Keep up the good work!