Reviews For Thanatophobia
Beautiful. Absolutely loved it.
This was all very powerful and moving stuff, but I think the highlight for me was when Rodney didn't want to look in John's eyes because his not fearing death was just as scary to Rodney as his own fear of dying was. Perhaps these two extremes need each other to level themselves out a bit. Laura.
This was incredibly effective. The backstory was well written and convincing. I really felt for Rodney. It explained the seemingly inexplicable. Stylistically it was spot on. Please keep writing.
Reviewer: Lee Michelle (Anonymous)
30 Jul 2005 7:48 pm
Lovely, I really liked this, very McKay, thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous)
30 Jul 2005 5:20 pm
I like it, but there is too much telling what Rodney is feeling and seeing. Next time, I would like to experience those things as Rodney, or whoever the charater is, does. It sorta makes the story all the more compelling. Nice that you got it done in one day, though. Timely!
Reviewer: fanficaddict (Anonymous)
30 Jul 2005 1:04 pm
Wow, very powerful :D Poor Rodney, having to live with that level of anxiety all the time :( Good thing he's got John :D